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Wednesday 8 October 2014

Cyprus: My holiday reading challenge retell.

Retell
(in 25 words or less)


The trick with retelling a story is keeping it to the main points.  In this case you only have 25 words so make them count! Post your recount onto your blog with a comment that tells you:
- Title: The Fawn
- Author: Margi
- Type of Book: Fiction
- Retell


There was this little girl name Kirsty and she was at her house. She wanted to play with her friends. And they went to the forest to play. But then they were playing hide and seek and Kirst had to count. Kirsty was trying to find all her friends but she got lost. She was by this waterfall and she stayed there. Then when she was relaxing she found a fawn and she was a little bit scared. Then fawn just went up to her and sat there. The fawn would protect her. The fawn would take her to the Fawn’s family.

5 comments:

Fine said...

Hi Cyprus,
An interesting book you're reading! I would love to hear more parts! Is this from the library? What is it under? Keep it up!

Yours Sincerely,
Fine

Cyprus said...

It is under at the senior fiction.

Boo said...

Keep up the good reading Cyprus. Would love to hear more about this book.

Raymond said...

Hi Cyprus

A good book to read it looked like you really enjoyed the book keep up the good work

Mengchun said...

Cyprus, the task is retell in '25' words or less. Your paragraph have more than 100 words. I think you can reduce the number of words by joining sentences together and deleting words that you don't need.

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