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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 6 August 2015

My procedural writing.

Maori tradition

This is my homework for this week. I had to write facts/information about a Maori tradition but I also did a tradition food about hangi.

Wednesday, 2 October 2013

My time in the holidays.

My time in the holidays on Saturday I went to Rainbows End with my family and with San Tat we all had a super day and when we got in we went on the bumper cars with my friends and we had lots of fun I bumped San Tat and my bumper car was vibrating. Then when our turn was over we went on the bumper boats and that was the best ride in our life. And then we went home because I had to go at a funeral and San Tat had to go to temple.

Friday, 6 September 2013

Production Goals. By Cyprus.


Production Goals

How to move from an OK performance to a Very Good Performance Move from being ZERO to HERO

* Talk slower - EVERYONE
* Look at the audience when we are speaking and acting out our parts
* Use more expression
* Don’t get distracted by the people behind- Cyprus, Thomas, Patrick, Linda, Fine, Angel, Jharda’e, Samantha, Oh S’mar, Jasmine, Jason
* Know the timing off by heart
* Talk louder - Fine, Angel,
* Be confident don’t be shy
* When you hear your cue- act on it.
* Look not laugh when someone makes a mistake
Don’t giggle when someone is acting
* Bodies facing audience, but also looking at the actor beside you - include your audience
* Don’t get distracted when you’re back stage
* Use some actions when you’re talking
* Get ready back stage
* Spread out those who are flowers, mountains, fish,
* Don’t let your class down
* Put lots of effort into the class performance
* Take your role seriously
* Leave other people alone
* Concentrate on your part
* Try and make the performance real

I think Room 5 should put lots of effort into the class performance because when  Patrick talks he goes so fast and the audience could not understand what he said.

Thursday, 5 September 2013

Kiwi kids news results. By Cyprus.

This is my kiwikids news results. Me and my partner Thomas had 100% and we were so happy. I didnt know that Who is the Labour Party leader that announced this week he is stepping down from the leadership role and the anwser is David shearer .

Thursday, 22 August 2013

This is my report writing on geysers. By Cyprus.

A geyser is a phenomenon that squirts hot water like volcano. The geyser is mostly from Rotorua they have a lot of geysers at Rotorua. A geyser is like a volcano shape but its underground. A geyser needs a water source, usually from miles under the Earth's surface.

The geyser also needs a heat source, supplied by the Earth's magma, about 3 miles (4.8 kilometers) under the surface of the Earth.  The magma heats the water, but hot water isn't enough,  another key factor is pressure. The water at the top of the geyser puts pressure on the water at the bottom of geyser shaft.

For geyser to occur there must be heat, water, and a plumbing system. A magma chamber provides the heat, which radiates into surrounding rock. Water from rain and snow works its way underground through fractures in the rock.
As the water reaches hot rock it begins to rise back to the surface, passing through, which is former volcanic ash or lava rich in silica. The hot water dissolves the silica and carries it upward to line rock crevices. This forms a constriction that holds in the mounting pressure, creating a geyser's plumbing system. Did you know that when a geyser erupts the pressure makes it erupt because the water in the geyser is too hot and it creates bubbles, and thats how the geyser erupts, the pressure from the geyser .










Monday, 12 August 2013

My blog comment to Ohsmar.

Cyprus said...
Hey Ohsmar.

I really love your sentence on reporting volcanos keep it up Ohsmar.

My blog comment to San Tat.

Cyprus said...
Hi San Tat

You have done lots of progress San Tat keep the good work going.

My blog comment to Santat.

Cyprus said...
Hi Santat

I really love your Math whizz results keep it up.

My comment to Jessie.

Cyprus said...
Hi Jessie.
I really like your results but I was thinking you could've done better then this result. Try get up to 40-50 smiley faces if you have more then that I will make a blog comment to you so make your progress better.

My blog comment to Jason.


cyprus said...
Hi Jason

I really like your maths dictionary. It has facts that my little brother doesn't know and he got them all right so thank you very much keep up he good work Jason.

Wednesday, 7 August 2013

My direction for treasure. By Cyprus


My  Directions

  1. Go outside the door.
  2. 102 big steps to the tree.
  3. Climb the tree.
  4. Put you hand in front of you.
  5. Grab!!

Monday, 5 August 2013

My blog comment to Santat. By Cyprus.


Cyprus said...
I really like your holiday story and the team that you and I play in marist. Good work Santat keep the work going.

Blog comment to Santat. By Cyprus.


Cyprus said...
I really like you Xtra Maths results because you have no crosses on your Xtra Maths results keep it up Santat.

Friday, 2 August 2013

My current event work. John and Cyprus


QUIZ
1. I/we got __100____ % on this weeks quiz.


3. The one question that was wrong was

4. The answer I put was

5. The correct answer is

WRITING
Use an article from Kiwi Kids News  to answer the following questions.           
1. Title of article:Odd stuff -Picking your nose and eating it is  good for you



2. Who is the main person or group of people in this news article?
The main person in this news article is Scott Napper
3. What was the key event from the news article?
The key event from the news article is Picking your nose and eating it
4. Where did this event take place?
This event took place at a University in magare
5. When did this event take place?
Over the last few years
6. Why did this event happen?
This event happened  because they  say that they
Thinking
1. Find quote from the main person in this news article ?
an associate professor of body build up its immune system against bugs and germs
biochemistry at the University, has suggested picking your nose and eating it helps your





2. In your own words retell what happened in this news article.  You may include a picture.
3. Explain what might happen in the future.
4. Use the Dictionary to find the meaning of 3 words from the article.

READING
Find the word study by going to STUDENTS then SPELLING. Read this week’s word study 25 April Anzac Day and complete the following.
Word Study
1. Look out for the focus word combination and list as many words as possible that have this focus.

2.  Find 5 nouns and 5 verbs from the word study article.

3. Choose 6 words from the text and write an antonym next to each word.
Spelling
4. Find the 5 spelling mistakes from the word study article and provide the correct spelling.

5.  Find 3 examples of either a preposition, a conjunction or an interjection.

6.   Pick 3  words from the text and put them into a word bank at the top of your paper. Write 3 clues relating to each word and leave a blank after the clues. The words can be related by similar categories. Examples:  Coat, raincoat, hat,____________ (answer: jacket)



Punctuation
7. Join two sentences together to make one. You may need to use commas to help make the sentence true.

8. Using the entire article as a guide, write a new sentence that could go into this piece of writing. Your sentence must have a comma and speech marks.

This is my current event work that my friend and I done. This is my article. There is a website and that website is called kiwi kids new GO ON NOW!!